Presentation feedback

• Hair needs to be looked at in further details in relation to my design 
• glitter wasn't popular in the 20's/30's as it was black and white film it would have looked like dots a high shin was very popular within this era. 
• Create a high contrast between mat and gloss 
• Look more at eye brow shapes 
• Research how you can look distressed how you can portray this through the design. 
• Characterisation NOT fashion 

I found this feedback very helpful i feel that it has enabled me to see were i currently am at and what i can now go on to do to develop and finalise my characterisation of Sally Bowles. I realised through this feedback that it is a characterisation and i need to make sure that my design is characterising Sally rather than a fashion interpretation this is were i feel at the moment my design is in the fashion bracket. I want to look deeper into how i can develop my design to really portray that contrast between reality and glamour and how to project distress onto the Sally deign in both hair and makeup. I will research further into classic makeup of the 20's/30's so i can get an idea of what they were using in the time to create a well though out historically correct design for my characterisation of Sally.